Step 1)
The journal itself is
extremely worn, but this could just be a product of the fact that it is more
than a hundred years old instead of Whitman’s usage. The writing style of
Whitman often seems to be scribbled and randomly strewn across the page in a
hurried manner. On a page titled “Brochure” there are the initials A. L.—this
could be a reference to Abraham Lincoln. On a page containing a poem that
starts off with “Welcome the storm” I can see that Whitman has crossed out
several words and replaced them with different ones. I find this interesting
because it shows that Whitman was human and made mistakes that he found necessary
to correct. There are several doodles of who appears to be Whitman. Some of the
seem to almost be distorted due to their incorrect bodily proportions, which
could mean that Whitman has a sense of humor. The picture of the skeleton on
the final page is eerie and out of place. It has a morbid theme to it, and
could mean that Whitman was contemplating the idea of death. Over the course of
the poems I often had a hard time reading Whitman’s handwriting.
Step 2)
If find it interesting
that Whitman put names and addresses on the inside cover—it shows that he
thought of it as something more personal to him than simply a place to store
his thoughts. I am intrigued that he chose to comment on his beliefs on
religion, contemplating the ideas of the Greek sage and Judaism and Christianity.
I think the theory of using “Liberdad” instead of “Liberty” is interesting
because it shows that Whitman may have believed that the concept of freedom wasn’t
limited to America alone. I also find it interesting that Whitman reached the
conclusion that the history of the world depended on the success or failure of
America’s democratic experiment before the President did. The fact that Whitman
often passed his notebook around, as evident by the doodles of him that he
likely did not draw, raises questions on whether or not we can be confident
that everything found in them is his own work. I enjoyed the picture of the
skeleton with the sword through his heart; I think that much of the notebook
shows Whitman’s self-reflection on the circumstances that America was in and
how he found them dire.
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